Mein Referat in English überprüfen,Bitte :(

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  1. 11. Juni 2008
    hi leute,

    unzwar geht es darum,dass ich ein referat in English halten muss.Ich bin auch schon fertig mit dem Sammeln und Ordnen der Materialien,aber ich möchte
    gerne sicher gehen,dass ich alles auch richtig habe.Also ich möchte,dass jemand mein Kurzreferat auf Grammatik-,Rechtschreib-und Satzstellunsgfehler überprüft.
    Ich steh total schlecht in English und deswegen darf ich mir in diesem refeart keine Fehler erlauben
    Ich wäre euch für eure hilfe unendlich Dankbar

    Hier mein Referat:

    Spongebob Squarepants:

    Spongebob Squarepants is an American animated Cartoon and its Currently the most wachted Cartoon.Spongebob was made by Stephen Hillenburg in 1998.
    The series is also popular by adults,because of the bizarre humor.Especially in the USA,Spongebob Squarepants has a big popularity.Spongebob was produced
    by Nickelodeon an American Channel.By now 5 episodes,altogether 140 season were produced.The Spongebob Squarepants Film is the first Cartoon Film of Spongebob and was made 2004.

    Main Characters:

    Spongebob Squarepants:Spongebob is the main Character of the Cartoon.He is a very friendly Sponge that loves Jellyfishing,to blow bubbles and Karate.
    He works at the Krusty Krab as the fry-cook.

    Patrick Star: Patrick Star is an pink Starfish and the best friend of Spongebob.He isnt very intellegent and lives under a rock.He wears green pink swimmin trunks.he is the neighbour of Spongebob and hasnt
    any job.Like Spongebob he loves Jellyfishing,too.

    THaddäus Tentacle:Spongebobs next door neighbour and co worker at the Krusty Krab,where he is the cashier.He hates Spongebob and Patrick,and openly shows his Hate towards them,not that they ever truly
    understand.He believes he is an amazing artist and clarinet Player,but is quite the opposite in reality.He lives in a Easter Island Head.

    Sandy Cheeks:Sandy is a clever Chipmunk scientist from Texas who has to wear an air helmnet to work under water.

    Eugene Krabs: A Crab that is the Boss of the Kruty Krab resaurant,where Spongebob works.He loves money,is a Selfish and greedy.

    Gary: Spongebobs pet.His only sound is a "miau",similar to a cat.In fact,he is considered to be a sea Cat.

    Sheldon J. PLankton A Small Plankton who is Mr.Krabs opponent.He always tries to get the Secret formula of the Krusty Krab burger.cause he wants his own restaurant,but always fails.


    Pearl Krabs: Mr.Krabs teenage daughter.She is a whale who atcs like a typical American teenage girl.

    Bikini Bottom:

    Bikini Bottom is the City where Spongebob and his friends lives and where the most of the Episodes take place.Bikini Bottom is similar to an average
    American City.There are Store,Restaurants and so on.The City has a rubust economy,balanced education,health systems,a government,a firm law and parks where they have fun.


    Popularity:

    Spongebob Squarepants remembers to older Cartoons like Bugs Bunny and Tom and Jerry.The Cartoon is designed to appeal to Children as well as older viewers.
    This has a lot to do the way under water life and situations are represented,absurdly.Instead of Cars the residents of Bikini Bottom drive boats with wheels.
    Because of the atmosphere,fire and Beaches under water,it gives a Special Charm and sometimes it has a hidden humor,that only adults understand.
    There is also a critical society to the USA.Spongebob loves to enjoy his life and he doesnt hide his Emotions.Sometimes this Emotions shows typical Problems in the Society.
    Some people says that Spongebob is nicht hetero.In the American nicht hetero culture are Spongebob and Tinky-Winky from the Teletubies nicht hetero figures.In one Episode Spongebob and Patrick bring up
    a Shellbaby as a married couple.Stephen Hillenburg,the deviser of Spongebob,disclaims that.

    So das ist das Referat.

    Bitte auf Grammatik,Rechtschreib und Satzstellunsgfehler korrigieren.

    Es ist sehr sehr Wichtig für mich.Danke im Vorraus

    mfg

    PS: wenn jemand noch Infos dazu hat,was denn nun an der USa kritisiert wird,dann immer her damit,habs nänlich nichts gefunden
     
  2. 11. Juni 2008
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    Habs nicht ganz gelesen, aber das kann nicht stimmen^^
     
  3. 11. Juni 2008
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    Könntest du es dann vielleicht bitte berichtigen? xD
     
  4. 11. Juni 2008
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    Das Referat ist voller grammatikalischer Fehler, sry ^^

    Ich mach mal den Absatz
    keine garantie auf komplette richtigkeit (eingeschlossen der verbesserungen)

    Das waren nur die allergröbsten Fehler und sehr grob berichtigt - ich schlage vor du kopierst am besten Textpassagen aus Wikipedia und formulierst sie nur leicht um.

    Ich würds gerne besser korrigieren und alles, aber hab nich viel Zeit
     
  5. 11. Juni 2008
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    auch die gröbsten fehler^^ muss aber net vollständig richtig sein ne^^
     
  6. 11. Juni 2008
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    Spongebob Squarepants:

    Spongebob Squarepants is an animated cartoon from america and it is currently the most watched cartoon (wo?).Spongebob was made by Stephen Hillenburg in 1998.
    The series is also popular by adults because of its bizarre humor especially in the USA. Spongebob was produced by Nickelodeon, an american TV-Channel. By now 5 seasons alltogether 140 episodes were produced. The Spongebob Squarepants Film is the first cartoon film of Spongebob and was made in 2004.

    Main Characters:

    Spongebob Squarepants:
    Spongebob is the main Character of the cartoon. He is a very friendly Sponge that loves Jellyfishing, blowing bubbles and practicing karate.
    He works for the Krusty Krab as a fry-cook.

    Patrick Star:
    Patrick Star is a pink Starfish and Spongebobs best friend. He is not very intelligent and lives under a rock. He wears green-pink swimming trunks. He is Spongebobs neighbour and does not have any job at all. Like Spongebob he loves Jellyfishing, too.

    Thaddäus Tentacle:
    The squid is Spongebobs next door neighbour and co-worker at the Krusty Krab, where he is the cashier. He hates Spongebob and Patrick and does not pretend it even in front of them, but they do not understand his hatred. He is convinced of himself as an amazing artist and clarinet player, but reality is quite the opposite. He lives in an Easter Island Head.

    Sandy Cheeks:
    Sandy is a clever Chipmunk scientist from Texas who has to wear a diving bell to work under water.

    Eugene Krabs:
    A crab that is the boss of the Krusty Krab restaurant where Spongebob works. He loves money, is a selfish and greedy person. (“[...]is a Selfish[...]” Falls du hier Egoist meintest: HAHAHAHAHAHAHA)

    Gary:
    The slug is Spongebobs pet. The only thing he says is "miau" which sounds similar to a cat. In fact,he is considered to be a sea Cat. (letzten Satz bitte nochmal überdenken)

    Sheldon J. Plankton:
    A small plankton who is Mr.Krabs opponent. He always tries to get the secret formula of the Krusty Krab Burger because he wants to establish his own restaurant but always fails.


    Pearl Krabs:
    Mr.Krabs teenage daughter. She is a whale who acts like a typical american teenage girl.

    Bikini Bottom:

    Bikini Bottom is the city where Spongebob and his friends live and where most of the episodes take place. Bikini Bottom is very similar to an average american city. There are stores, restaurants and so on (beende den Satz vernünftig). The city has a robust economy, balanced education, health systems, government, a law firm and parks where they have fun.


    Popularity:

    Spongebob Squarepants reminds one of older cartoons like “Bugs Bunny” and “Tom and Jerry”. The cartoon is designed to appeal to Children as well as older viewers.
    This has a lot to do with the way under water life and situations are represented: absurdly(Das Ende des Satzes würde ich auch noch abändern). Instead of cars the citizens of Bikini Bottom drive boats on wheels. Because of the atmosphere, fire and beaches under water, it gives a special charm and sometimes there is hidden humor, that only adults can understand.
    There is also a critical point of view to the USA. Spongebob loves to enjoy his life and he doesn’t hide his emotions. Sometimes this emotions show typical problems in society (Macht keinen Sinn, lieber:” Sometimes Spongebobs actions represent current problems in american society”). Some people say that Spongebob is nicht hetero. In the american nicht hetero culture Spongebob and Tinky-Winky from the Teletubies are nicht hetero symboles. In one episode Spongebob and Patrick bring up
    a Shellbaby as a married couple. Stephen Hillenburg, the deviser of Spongebob, disclaims this rumor.

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    So, mal ganz abgesehen davon, dass dein Englisch extrem verbesserungswürdig ist, finde ich das Thema etwas ungeschickt gewählt. Falls du herausstellen wolltest, dass Spongebob nicht unbedingt ausschließlich für Kinder gemacht wurde, solltest du das deutlicher schreiben.

    Ein paar Tipps am Rande:

    Im Englischen werden ausschließlich Eigennamen wie z.B. „Krusty Krab“, „Spongebob“ und der erste Buchstabe des ersten Wortes im Satz großgeschrieben. SONST NICHTS. Keine Verben, keine Adjektive… eben NICHTS.
    Außerdem ist mir aufgefallen: Bei der dritten Person singular (He, she, it, also: Er, sie, es) fehlt bei dir oft das „s“. Beispiel: You ****. He ****s. Betonung liegt hierbei auch auf singular. We ****. They ****.  KEIN s. Noch ein kleiner Tipp: Versuche dich mal in englischer Lektüre, das hilft ungemein auch wenn es lästig ist. Nimm dir ein Buch, das du gut findest und suche den Titel einfach auf Englisch. Ich garantiere übrigens nicht, dass alles richtig ist Und zum Schluss noch ne Frage: In welcher Klasse bist du?

    mfg Ichigo
     
  7. 11. Juni 2008
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    habe weiter keine zeit mehr.

    achte drauf: 1. groß/klein schreibung
    2. genitiv
     
  8. 11. Juni 2008
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    tip: Großgeschrieben werden nur Namen und Satzanfänge. Du hast ne Menge Nomen und Adjektive groß geschrieben.
    Nicht so entscheidend, aber manche Lehrer streichen das als Fehler.
     
  9. 11. Juni 2008
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    Code:
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    The series is also popular by adults,because of the bizarre humor.Especially in the USA,Spongebob Squarepants has a big popularity.Spongebob was produced
    by Nickelodeon, an [color=red]a[/color]merican [color=red]c[/color]hannel.By now 5 episodes,altogether 140 seasons were produced.The Spongebob Squarepants Film is the first [color=red]c[/color]artoon [color=red]f[/color]ilm of Spongebob and was made in 2004.
    
    [B][I]Main Characters:[/I][/B]
    
    Spongebob Squarepants:Spongebob is the main [color=red]c[/color]haracter of the [color=red]c[/color]artoon.He is a very friendly sponge that loves jellyfishing,to blow bubbles and karate.
    He works at the Krusty Krab as the fry-cook.
    
    Patrick Star: Patrick Star is an pink starfish and the best friend of Spongebob.He isn't very intelligent and lives under a rock. He wears green pink swimmin trunks.he is the Spongebob's neighbour and hasn't got
    any job.Similiar to Spongebob he loves Jellyfishing,too.
    
    Thaddäus Tentacle:Spongebob's next door neighbour and co worker at the Krusty Krab,where he is the cashier.He hates Spongebob and Patrick,and openly shows it towards them,not that they ever truly
    understand.He believes he is an amazing artist and clarinet player,but is quite the opposite in reality.He lives in a Easter Island Head.
    
    Sandy Cheeks:Sandy is a clever chipmunk scientist from Texas who has to wear an air helmnet to work under water.
    
    Eugene Krabs: Mr. Krabs is a red crab and the boss of the Kruty Krab resaurant,where Spongebob works.He loves money,is a selfish person and extremely greedy.
    
    Gary: Spongebob's pet.His only sound is a "miau",similar to a cat. In fact,he is considered to be a sea cat.
    
    Sheldon J. PLankton: a small plankton who is Mr.Krabs' greatest opponent.He always tries to get the secret formula of the Krusty Krab bBurger, because he wants to have his own restaurant.Nevertheless he always fails.
    
    
    Pearl Krabs: Mr.Krabs' teenage daughter.She is a whale who atcs like a typical [color=red]a[/color]merican teenage girl.
    
    [I][B]Bikini Bottom:[/I][/B]
    
    Bikini Bottom is the city where Spongebob and his friends live and where most of the episodes take place.Bikini Bottom is similar to an average
    [color=red]a[/color]merican city.There are stores,restaurants and several other locations.The city has a rubust economy,balanced education,health systems,a government,a firm law and parks where they have fun.
    
    
    [I][B]Popularity:[/I][/B]
    
    Spongebob Squarepants remembers to older [color=red]c[/color]artoons like "Bugs Bunny" and "Tom and Jerry".The [color=red]c[/color]artoon is designed to appeal to children as well as older viewers.
    This has a lot to do the way under water life and situations are represented,absurdly.Instead of [color=red]c[/color]ars the residents of Bikini Bottom drive boats with wheels.
    Because of the atmosphere,fire and [color=red]b[/color]eaches under water,it gives a Special [color=red]c[/color]harm and sometimes it has a hidden humor,that only adults understand.
    There is also a critical society to the USA.Spongebob loves to enjoy his life and he doesnt hide his [color=red]e[/color]motions.Sometimes this [color=red]e[/color]motions shows typical [color=red]p[/color]roblems in the [color=red]s[/color]ociety.
    Some people says that Spongebob is [color=red]g[/color]ay.In the American [color=red]g[/color]ay culture are Spongebob and Tinky-Winky from the Teletubies nicht hetero figures.In one [color=red]e[/color]pisode Spongebob and Patrick bring up
    a Shellbaby as a married couple.Stephen Hillenburg,the deviser of Spongebob,disclaims that.

    hab den text nur auf rechtschreibfehler koregiert auf grammatik hat ich kein bock ... da waren so einige fehler drin ^^

    eine frage noch in welche klasse gehst du ?
     
  10. 12. Juni 2008
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    danke euch,dass reicht mir auh schob

    ich geh in de 10te klasse

    English ist überhaupt nicht mein Fach,garnicht xD
     
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