GLobal Warming - Englisches Video! EDIT: Eigene Fassung!

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  1. 15. April 2010
    Moin,

    ich werde warscheinlich in der Prüfung etwas über Global Warming bekommen und müssen sicher etwas darüber schreiben, so wie in der letzten Arbeit.

    Da ich sowieso nicht gerade gut in Englisch bin habe ich mir eben mal ein Video reingezogen.

    Global Warming 101 - YouTube

    Ich habe es dann nochmal schriftlich niedergeschrieben.

    Was ich euch fragen wollte ist, ob ich die Wörter richtig verstanden habe?
    Ich habe einige auch garnicht verstande so 3-5.

    Und ob diese Erklärung auch genügend ist, wenn ich genau das in der Prüfung über Global Warming schreiben würde? oder fehlen da einige aspekte?
    ich habe schon viel über global warming gelesen etc... klar kann man da noch vieles hinzufügen, werde auch selbst eitwas miteinfügen später.

    Hoffe ihr könnt mir bei dem Text helfen

    Spoiler
    For 2.5 million years the earths climet has fluctuated, cycling from ice ages to warmer periods.
    But in the last century the planet temperature has risen unusual fast about 1.2 to 1.4 degrees farenheit.
    Scientis believe that human activity thats driving the temperatures up. Aprocess known as global warming.
    Every since the industrie revolution begun, factorys, powerplants and eventually cars had burns fast and fuels
    suches oil and p... realising huge amounts of carbon dioxide and other gases into the atmosphere.
    This greenhouse gases trap heat near the earth through naturely accoring process called the greenhouse effect.
    The greenhouse effect begins with the sun and the energy at radiate to the earth.
    The earth and the atmosphere absorbes some of the energy while the rest is rediated back into the space.
    Naturally accoring gases in the atmosphere traps some of the energy and reflected back warm the earth.
    Scientist now believe that the greenhouse effect is beeing intensified by the extra greenhouse gases,
    that humes have realized.
    Evidence for global warming includes a reason str..... a very warm years.
    Scientist record that 1998 was the warmest year in measured history with 2005 coming in second.
    Meanwhile redince?? take from an icecore show the greenhouse gases carbon dioxide anmethin? have yet the
    highest level in the past 420.000 years.
    Artic seeice is also shrinking. According to nasa studys the extentive??? see ice has declined about
    10% in the last 30 years.
    As long as industrilize nations consume energy and develop in countrys increase there fals and fuel consumtion??.
    The concentration of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere will continue to rise.
    Researchers prodict that tempratures will increase about 2 to 10 degrees farenheit by the end of century, what less certain is what rising tempratures mean for the planet.
    some climet martels? prodict settle changes. Others forcast rising sealevels which could floods cause areas around the world.
    Whether parents can change, making hurricans more free....?.
    s......
    could be come more ca...? in warm area and speeches unable to adapt to the change in conditions with face insdiction.
    Allthere much remains to be learn about global warming, many organisations ablicate cutting greenhouse gas emissions to reduce the impact of global warming.
    Consumers can help by saving energy around the house, swiching the compact for res.......... ?
    and driving few miles with the car which week.
    These simples changes may help heat the earth cooler in the future

    bw is dabei
    danke
    ___

    Eigene Fassung:
    Ich denke es ist echt ein wenig zu lang. Ich würde mich freuen, wenn es jemanden gelingt, es zu verkürzen, und auch die fehler zu verbessern, ich selber sehe ja nicht alles

    Spoiler
    For 2.5 million years the earth's climate has fluctuated, cycling from ice ages to warmer periods. But in the last century the planets temperature has risen unusually fast.
    Nowadays, many disasters happen on Earth.
    What is the reason for that? The question of global warming has long been a point of argument between scientists. Are we really threatened?
    I m certain that one can safely say, that some places on the earth are threatened cause of the climate change and global warming. The fact is that the disappearance of ice cover has been dramatic in recent years, the arctic see ice is shrinking fast about 10% in the last 30 years. The Arctic sea ice, which covers an area the size of united states; shrank by about 6 percent between 1978 and 1996 according to the world watch report, it lost an average of 34,300 square kilometers a year, an area larger than the Netherlands.
    In this case, melting glaciers can cause serious floods. One example of this occurred in Nepal in 1985, when a glacial lake burst sending a 15-meter high wall of water down the mountains, drowning people and destroying houses. However, it will make earthquake, hurricanes and other storms more destructive and the higher temperatures may also make these storms more intense and frequent. And a big problem is the volcanic eruptions which pollute the air rapidly. For example, few weeks ago was an volcanic eruption in the Country Island (Rejkyavik). This proves that climate has change.
    And what is the reason for that problems?
    There are many reasons for this disastrous and there is no doubt about it that we are threatened cause of global warming.
    In my opinion, we are not at fault for the climate changes. We should not ignore our environment though. It does not hurt to separate our trash or to leave the car parked sometimes, which would help our figures. We only have this one planet and should handle it with respect.
    The increase of global warming is due to human activities, too, like:
    - burning gasoline to drive cars and trucks and power plants which produce many of emissions
    - burning oil, coal or wood to produce electricity
    - for heating, cooling, and other purposes burning forests to clear land
    Also a process known as global warming and that activities pollute the air, water and the earth. Also the water is an important source for the living on earth. But the clean-water is reducing cause of the pollution.
    Ever since the industrial revolution begun, factories, power plants and eventually cars have burned fossil fuels: such as oil and coal.
    The human beings releasing huge amounts of carbon dioxide, exhaust fumes, emissions and other gases into the atmosphere. These gases trap heat near the earth through naturally according process called the greenhouse effect. In that case, the warming effect is the reason for the vicious circle in the greenhouse. The main gases that cause the greenhouse effect is the process in which the emission, exhaust fumes, water vaper, Co2, methane, nitrous oxide etc. of infrared radiation reach to the atmosphere warms a planet's surface.
    In my opinion the greenhouse effect begins with the sun and the energy that radiates to the earth, because the earth and the atmosphere absorbs 51% of the energy-rays while the rest is radiated back into space. Naturally according gases in the atmosphere trap some of this energy and reflect it back warm the earth. Through this events, many scientists claim that we have increased the size of the hole in the ozone layer.
    It is important to mention that human beings and animals are threatened to become victim of skin cancer cause of the sun's radiation, which radiates with UV-Rays into the earth.

    The fact is that the concentration of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere will continue to rise.
    But on the other hand, we should to know, that human beings are dependent of the power plant, cars, airplane, electrician and sheet of paper, for which we need to cut up many trees. The trees are very important for the living as well, because they create for example apple's and other fruits, which animals have to eat. Even nobody want to live on desert. If we cut up all trees on a area, than we could have a desert in the area. We can get a storm.
    I think I don't have to explain why we need vehicles or trees etc.
    To reduce global warming, consumers can help slow global warming by:
    -Walking, riding your bicycle, or taking the bus instead of always going by car.
    -Not wasting electricity (turn off the lights, the radio, the TV and the computer when you're not using them).
    -Reducing, reusing or recycling all kinds of items, from soda pop cans to clothes, to save energy and raw materials.
    -Planting trees to help absorb excess CO2, and to provide shade and windbreaks to keep buildings at more even temperatures so they will require less energy for heating or cooling.
     
  2. 15. April 2010
    AW: GLobal Warming - Englisches Video!

    Others forcast rising sealevels which could floods COST areas around the world.
    Whether parents can change, making hurricans more FREQUENT s...... could be come more COMMON in warm area and speeches unable to adapt to the change in conditions with face insdiction.
    ALLTHOUGH much remains to be learn about global warming, many organisations ALLEVIATE cutting greenhouse gas emissions to reduce the impact of global warming.
    Consumers can help by saving energy around the house, swiching the compact for RESERVE LIGHT BULBS and driving few miles with the car which week.




    ist leider nur etwas vom Schluss hatte gerade nicht sehr viel zeit...
    verusch heut abend nochmal reinzuschaun.
    ob die informationen für eine prüfung reichen ist schwer zu sagen, es befastt sich hiermit wirklich nur um absolute grundlagen und nicht mehr. für eine prüfung wäre ein bisschen mehr wissen wahrscheinlich angebracht und es dem lehrer gefällt ist eine sache die dir hier keine sagen kann;-)

    mfg clint
     
  3. 17. April 2010
    AW: GLobal Warming - Englisches Video!

    ich hab mal schnell grob versucht die Fehler rauszufinden, du hattest auch eine Menge Fehler in den 'nicht markierten Stellen'. Ein paar Fehler sind noch drin


    For 2.5 million years the earths climate has fluctuated, cycling from ice ages to warm appearience.
    But in the last century the planets temperature has risen unusually fast: about 1.2 to 1.4 degrees farenheit.
    Scientists believe it's human activity, thats driving the temperatures up.
    A process known as global warming.
    Ever since the industrial revolution begun, factorys, powerplants and eventually cars have burned fossil fuels: such as oil and coal.
    Releasing huge amounts of carbon dioxide and other gases into the atmosphere.
    These greenhouse gases trap heat near the earth through naturely accouring process called the greenhouse effect.
    The greenhouse effect begins with the sun and the energy that radiates to the earth.
    The earth and the atmosphere absorbes some of the energy while the rest is radiated back into space.
    Naturally accouring gases in the atmosphere trap some of this energy and reflect it back warm the earth.
    Scientist now believe that the greenhouse effect is beeing intensified by the extra greenhouse gases, that humes have released.
    Evidence for global warming includes a reason s..? very warm years.
    Scientists record that 1998 was the warmest year in measured history with 2005 coming in second.
    Meanwhile redince?? taken from an icecore show the greenhouse gases carbon dioxide and methan have yet the highest levels in the past 420.000 years.
    Artic seeice is also shrinking. According to nasa studies the extending see ice has declined about
    10% in the last 30 years.
    As long as industrilize nations consume energy and developing countries increase there fossil fuel consumption.
    The concentration of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere will continue to rise.
    Researchers predict that tempratures will increase about 2 to 10 degrees farenheit by the end of the century, whats less certain is what rising tempratures mean for the planet.
    some climate models predict settle changes. Others forcast rising sealevels which could flood cost areas around the world.
    Whether patterns can change, making hurricans more frequent.
    s...... could be come more common in warm area and species unable to adapt to the change in conditions with face insdiction.
    Although much remains to be learn about global warming, many organisations applicate cutting greenhouse gas emissions to reduce the impact of global warming.
    Consumers can help :by saving energy around the house, switching the compact for reserve light bulbs
    and driving fewer miles with the car each week.
    These simple changes may help heat the earth cooler in the future
     
  4. 17. April 2010
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    cool danke euch beiden.
    bws sind raus,
    würd mich freuen wenn noch jmd die letzten fehler beheben könnte :S
     
  5. 17. April 2010
    AW: GLobal Warming - Englisches Video!


    Also das sind wirklich nur die am häufigsten angesprochenen Punkte, die mit Global Warming zusammenhängen.

    Zudem ist das alles sehr unkritisch aufgelistet. Selbst die Politiker mussten nun bitter lernen, dass man vieles dieser Aussagen relativieren muss! Oft wurden nur statistische Fluktiationen interpretiert und dann als Fakten dargestellt.

    Wenn dein Vortrag wirklich primär über das Thema gehen soll, würde ich mich viel differenzierter informieren und das ganze Thema auch mal von einer etwas kritischeren Seite betrachten! Es kommt bei dem Thema wirklich auf die Details an!

    Auf jeden Fall kein einfaches Thema, man kann sich da schnell in etwas reinreiten, weshalb eine kritische Haltung vielleicht von Vorteil wäre.
     
  6. 18. April 2010
    AW: GLobal Warming - Englisches Video!

    Tja

    da habe ich mir auch schon die Mühe gemacht und es mal ganz umgeschrieben in comment mässig.
    Denke es sind noch einige fehler dabei. daher wäre es toll wenn es jemand schafft es zu verkürzen vllt.


    Spoiler
    For 2.5 million years the Earth's climate has fluctuated, cycling from ice ages to warmer periods. But in the last century the planet's temperature has risen unusually fast.
    Nowadays, many disasters happen on Earth.
    What is the reason for that? The question of global warming has a point of argument between scientists for a long time. Are we really threatened?
    I'm certain that one can safely say, that some places on the earth are threatened because of the climate change and global warming. The fact is that the disappearance of ice cover has been dramatic in recent years. According to NASA studies the extent of sea ice has declined about 10% in the last 30 years. The Arctic sea ice, which covers an area the size of the United States; shrank by about 6 percent between 1978 and 1996, losing an average of 34,300 square kilometers a year, an area larger than the Netherlands.

    In this case, melting glaciers can cause serious floods. One example of this occurred in Nepal in 1985, when a glacial lake burst sending a 15-meter high wall of water down the mountains. People drowned and houses were destroyed. However, it will make earthquake, hurricanes and other storms more destructive and the higher temperatures may also make these storms more intense and frequent. And another big problem are the volcanic eruptions which pollute the air rapidly. We are suffering from the effects of one of these at the moment.
    And what is the reason for that problems?
    There are many reasons for this disastrous and there is no doubt about it that we are threatened cause of global warming.

    Among the reasons for the changes are:
    - burning gasoline to drive cars and trucks and power plants which produce many of emissions
    - burning oil, coal or wood to produce electricity, or for heating, cooling, and other purposes,
    - for heating, cooling, and other purposes burning forests to clear land

    In my opinion, is not only nature's fault for the climate change, we are also blame for climate change. In that case we should not ignore our environment though. It does not hurt to separate our trash or to leave the car parked sometimes, which would help our figures. We only have this one planet and should handle it with respect.
    As far as we know, by these activities mankind has not only polluted the air and water and the ground but also set in motion a process known as global warming.
    A naturally occurring phenomenon called "the greenhouse effect" plays an important role in this development. It is based on the fact that the Earth's atmosphere acts a little like the glass of a greenhouse, allowing the heat of the Sun to enter and then capturing it. To be more precise, the Earth and the atmosphere absorb 51% of the Sun's energy-rays while the rest are radiated back into space. Naturally occurring gases in the atmosphere trap some of this energy and reflect it back to the Earth.

    Ever since the Industrial Revolution began, factories, power plants and eventually cars have burned fossil fuels: such as oil and coal, releasing huge amounts of Carbon Dioxide and other gases (CO2, Methane, Nitrous Oxide etc.) into the atmosphere.

    Scientist now believe that the greenhouse effect is being intensified by the extra greenhouse gases that humans have released. Not only has the concentration of UV-rays - contained in the Sun's radiation - increased, causing skin cancer in human beings or animals, but also have the temperatures on the Earth's surface risen significantly. Through this events, many scientists claim that the global warming have increased the size of the hole in the ozone layer.

    As long as the industrialized nations consume energy and developing countries increase their fossil fuel consumption, the concentration of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere will continue to rise.

    But on the other hand, we should to know, that human beings are dependent of the power plant, cars, airplane, electrician and sheet of paper, for which we need to cut up many trees. The trees are very important for the living as well, because they produce for example apple's and other fruits, which animals have to eat. Even nobody want to live on desert. If we cut up all trees on a area, than we could have a desert in the area. We can get a storm.
    I think I don't have to explain why we need vehicles or trees etc.
    To reduce global warming, consumers can help slow global warming by:
    - walking, or taking the bike or the bus instead of always going by car.
    - not wasting electricity (turn off the lights, the radio, the TV and the computer when you're not using them).
    - reducing, reusing or recycling all kinds of items, from soda pop cans to clothes, to save energy and raw materials.
    - planting trees to help absorb excess CO2, and to provide shade and windbreaks to keep buildings at more even temperatures so they will require less energy for heating or cooling.
     
  7. 20. April 2010
    Zuletzt von einem Moderator bearbeitet: 15. April 2017
    AW: GLobal Warming - Englisches Video! EDIT: Eigene Fassung!

    Sammlung aller RR-Sprachbegabten

    Versuchs damit?

    Denke die User die dort eingetragen sind, beherrschen Englisch fließend.. lass einen von denen mal drüber gucken..
    Wenns so dringend ist..
     
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